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L. Cohen's avatar

the let me in, let me in, the flower is you friend, feels like chorus of a song to me. it sings off the page. nice poem.

Wonder-Fool's avatar

Thank you! Yeah that’s exactly how it sounded like when I heard it in my head the first time. It was like: “Red door, red door. Let me in. Every flower is a friend.” And then it evolved into what I wrote in the poem.

Lewis LaCook's avatar

Excellent work!

Wonder-Fool's avatar

I appreciate it man! Thanks for reading and thanks for restacking! 🙏